Still reeks of amateurishness, but I think its just the vocalist with unprofessional gear, which isn't exactly cheap. You guys don't sound half bad, and to be honest, you'll go far if you stick at it. The guy who does the backing tracks is brilliant, but the vocalist still has that... young boy/not fully developed singing voice sound. sorry, just my take on it. but stick at it, i can see you guys getting a following in the underground electro scene if you can really make your music your own, and get a regular sound going.