Music sounds OK , but the name of both the band and album have absolutely NOTHING to do with the Industrial scene ... neither the aesthetics . Go for something more dark and demented , try blood & rusted machinery , fuse them , make it look like you're a cyborg , get a gasmask , or anything else that's related to that post-apocalyptic / dystopian future ... That always works . Or try something unique . I wish you good luck , and don't be bothered by reviews , the people in God Module aren't , tho the last album had many negative reviews xD
Welcome to Journalism, you say what you feel. I am sorry If It caused offense, and I have to urge you to remember that musically, you do have talent. That is never in question.
Unfortunately, there are also some 40+people who agree that the aesthetic does not work for this scene.
Sorry kid, but that's how it is. For the record, your single and EP is in my opinion, a lot better.