Your voice is getting better. Turn down the treble on the guitar just a touch so we can hear your voice better! I also recommend buying a "pop"-blocking screen for your microphone (they are supposed to keep annoying vocal pops from happening in your recordings). Did you mean Winterish or Wintery? ;) Wintery would be the correct word... :D
Hey, I have added you to the "connected artists" section in The Home Guard FANCLUB!! - It is my goal to connect all other musicians who are fans of The Home Guard to the fanclub.
"Falling in Love" - The chord progression used here is nearly identical to my track "Acorn," check it out! Very pretty voice by the way, but you may need some bass to balance it out?
I've listened to your music before on MySpace, and now again here... I love it! I honestly believe you have a top-class talent. I can't wait to hear more, as and when you get round to recording new material! Oh, and thanks for all the kind things you said about my band (The Home Guard). :-)
hi i got your recomandation an also listend to your songs a few times.
i like falling in love, especially the chorus, also the lirics are very nice.
criticism: ther is a lot of nois in the recording probably from breathing in to the mic, the recording of without you is better. i also think the guitar is a litle loud compared to the voice. you also can work on your pronunciation some words are harde to understand i think thats important becaus you sort of tell a story. i think falling in love is a bit long i would leav out the last minute.
also i think your voice is not very full and sounds a bit monotonous may be you could experiment with singing duett with your self but im not en expert.
keep up the good work an i to wish you lots of success